80,001–100,000 words

A$1,680.00

Shaping stories with fresh perspectives.

The goal: to give you constructive, considered feedback that strengthens your craft and keeps you connected to the work.

The outcome: you receive clear, actionable insights that deepen your understanding of your manuscript and support the next stages of writing, drafting, and revision.

What’s included

  • your manuscript returned with personalised notes

  • alpha or beta report (answering up to 10 questions provided by you)

  • 60 minutes of 1:1 coaching via Zoom

  • 8 week turnaround

The process

After you purchase, I’ll be in touch within 2 business days to confirm your start and delivery dates. Your timeline may differ from your payment schedule, and if you’re on a payment plan, the final balance is due before the deliverables are released.

Important

This service is available for middle grade, young adult, and adult fiction full‑length novels only.

Shaping stories with fresh perspectives.

The goal: to give you constructive, considered feedback that strengthens your craft and keeps you connected to the work.

The outcome: you receive clear, actionable insights that deepen your understanding of your manuscript and support the next stages of writing, drafting, and revision.

What’s included

  • your manuscript returned with personalised notes

  • alpha or beta report (answering up to 10 questions provided by you)

  • 60 minutes of 1:1 coaching via Zoom

  • 8 week turnaround

The process

After you purchase, I’ll be in touch within 2 business days to confirm your start and delivery dates. Your timeline may differ from your payment schedule, and if you’re on a payment plan, the final balance is due before the deliverables are released.

Important

This service is available for middle grade, young adult, and adult fiction full‑length novels only.

About

Manuscript reads provide thoughtful and constructive feedback that strengthens both the book and the writer.

Great writers have always had help in shaping their stories. We need people to approach our writing with a fresh perspective because it is the only way to know if the vision we are striving to achieve is actually working.

Alpha and beta readers are a valuable resource that help us see what’s working, what’s unclear, what’s missing, and what’s possible.

Just as A comes before B, then alpha readers see your manuscript before a beta reader does.

Alpha Read

Alphas approach your work as a writer‑reader — someone who can help you identify holes or missed connections in your story. They’re looking at the big picture and helping you see what’s working, what isn’t, and what parts of your vision aren’t yet translating onto the page.

Alphas are crucial in helping you build your story and nurture your characters. They want to help you make your story the absolute best it can be. That means real talk: constructive, thoughtful, and considered feedback.

Beta Read

Beta readers approach your work as your future readers would, not as if they were writing the book themselves. They’re often chosen because they’re part of your intended audience — people who are likely to enjoy the genre you’re writing in.

Beta reads usually come later in the writing process, after structural and copy edits. They help you answer specific questions so you can feel confident your book is achieving what you intended. A beta reader gives feedback on their reading experience — what they liked, what didn’t land, and how the story made them feel.